Saturday, May 19, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday 5/19

Hi everyone! I'm on my family final Canadian tour and I'm half in the bag as I post this. (In my defense, it's the long weekend, Victoria Day, May 2-4. We're celebrating the Queen. That's my story, blah, blah, blah.) So I apologize in advance; I have no idea if this is good or not. But this is a story that just got the green light last week and my editor pointed out this bit in particular as something he liked:

Her beautiful, slender, exquisite feet. Holding one in his hand after holding one in his dreams for so long made him yearn to kiss it. He looked up at her and she nodded knowingly. ‘One,’ she said. So he placed one reverent kiss on the top, as he inhaled her scent, the nylon brushing his lips.
The shushing sound of the nylon of her stocking against the hard leather of her shoe and the subtle pop as her heel slipped into place made his cock ache.
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  1. This is beautifully written! Well done :) I think foot fetishes are under-represented in erotica (well, at least the stuff I read!)

    1. Thanks, Ana! I'm just recently interested in foot fetish stuff. So I don't really know how well represented it is or not. But that'd be good if I'm not writing the same stuff as everyone else!


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