Today I'm going to post something brand new I'm working on. It's going to be in a diary format. A recent divorcee, previously mousy and prim, gets out of her marriage and finds a new woman emerging...
Keep working on it? Or scrap it? Comment below!I’ll admit, the lights were low. In the club, all the way home in the cab, back at his little apartment over the tatoo shop, the lighting was thankfully dim. Was it naughty of me to keep up the charade? When he saw the photo of my daughter on my phone and asked if it was my sister, what should I have said? I don’t know now and I didn’t know then which is why I kept my mouth shut and the lights dim and half my clothes on while I straddled him in his bed. He soon forgot.
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I like it. But, trying to think of anything you've written and I've read that I didn't like. Hmmmm......
ReplyDeleteAw, Mr. Prez, ever the charmer. :) Thx!
DeleteThis might sound harsh but if you are asking the question it is time to give it a little room on the mental shelf and you'll subconsciously iron out the plot, then drive back into it.
ReplyDeleteIt doesn't sound harsh, I did ask the question! But I'm just a little confused... You could tell the plot needed ironing out from six sentences?! I actually wrote it about two weeks ago so it has had some time on the mental shelf. I'm hoping to get back to it today so maybe it will have ironed itself out. Thx for your comment!
DeleteIntriguing, I'd like to see where this is going, and whether he's going to find out the truth.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Paula! I'm unsure if he's going to be around long enough to find out. Lol. My plan is for her to go on a bit of a tear. ;)
DeleteKind of like a coming of age story - only she's a divorcee. I'm intrigued. It could be very interesting in diary format.
ReplyDeleteYes, what a great analogy! Exactly. Thanks Karyn!
DeleteOoh, I like it! You must keep working on it:) Love the premise, will make for a great story:)
ReplyDeleteYep! Keep working on it! I like the idea!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great start to me. I can see lots of directions to take this story! Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThank you, ladies! I have been having great fun with our recent divorcee this afternoon. She really put her young man through his paces. ;)
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